Watching

29 Mar


These are the moments when I stop breathing. It’s ridiculous to think that you can hear my hitched breaths, particularly with the smacks and cries flooding your back yard, but fear of discovery makes me as wooden as the fence I’m pressed against.
 
I watch your legs kick — although the left seems to be more the runner of the two, with its enthusiastic jolts and scissoring.
 
He is efficient and fearsome in his concentration. Amid your wild arm movements and open-mouthed grimaces, he stays on task, coloring your bottom evenly, pausing to pin one wayward arm against your back. You have far more spunk now than I’ve ever seen at the Neighborhood Association meetings.
 
My friend, what have you done to deserve this outdoor treatment?
 
And is there a good deed I can do to receive the same?

21 Responses to “Watching”

  1. redbottomedgirl March 29, 2011 at 9:57 pm #

    Bravo! I love this! 🙂 I love the way it flows, I love the imagery, I love how the last line makes me smile. You are awesome. Celine

    • Barely Pink March 29, 2011 at 10:03 pm #

      Thanks Celine! I love the thought of watching, and I know I’d wish it was me.

      On a side note, I’ve missed you! Will check your blog for updates tomorrow. xx

  2. D March 29, 2011 at 10:03 pm #

    Pink, we need to talk about your participation in the “Neighborhood Watch”.

  3. Zelle March 29, 2011 at 10:44 pm #

    Whoa! The Neighborhood Watch Group around her was NEVER that interesting! Where do I sign?

    • Barely Pink March 30, 2011 at 8:18 am #

      Oh, how I wish there was such a thing as a spanking neighborhood. Instead of the sounds of lawn mowers, there’d be the echoing sounds of spankings in progress.

      I don’t think I’d ever sleep! It’d be like our own little spanking porn 24/7!

      • Zelle March 30, 2011 at 10:05 am #

        But Pink! There is! I named it “Flogger Falls”! I wrote about it once! Perhaps I should blog it. LOL — Such a fun place for a gathering of “Stepford Spankos”! LOL

      • Barely Pink March 30, 2011 at 1:51 pm #

        DEFINITELY blog it. Flogger Falls, mwuhahaha, awesome.

  4. wordsmith March 30, 2011 at 2:05 am #

    A bad deed might work better Pink. That’s where you have been going wrong all this time! 😉

    • Barely Pink March 30, 2011 at 8:19 am #

      Is that it? Oh, but Wordsmith, I worry about the state of my bottom if I were to make a habit of bad deeds. The good deeds already tax my cheeks. 😛

  5. steve March 30, 2011 at 4:46 am #

    I hope you do wander your backyard in that state. Sounds like you live in a wonderful neghborhood any houses for sale.

    • Barely Pink March 30, 2011 at 8:20 am #

      As a matter of fact…the house on the other side of my fence is for sale. Move in so I can invade your privacy, too. Be sure to put on, at a minimum, a weekly show.

      • steve March 30, 2011 at 1:50 pm #

        only weekly? I forgot it does snow up there, so keep it to yourself. But do enjoy. Still love the posts.

      • Barely Pink March 30, 2011 at 1:54 pm #

        LOL..you just don’t want some girl blogging about what you do in the privacy of your back yard. 😛

      • steve March 30, 2011 at 2:40 pm #

        that’s why I I’ve in the country. But with your wonderfully done writing it would be an honor.

  6. Jon March 30, 2011 at 11:01 am #

    Sexy post Pink! I love how you left it to our imagination to wonder what she’s looking at.
    🙂

    • Barely Pink March 30, 2011 at 1:53 pm #

      I like to think they’re participating in some creative lawn mowing. She grabs handfuls of grass, he moves the chair, ’round and ’round they go ’til the grass is short. Couldn’t get greener than that, could it?

  7. Brett March 31, 2011 at 10:24 am #

    I like watching the watcher. I’m a voyeur’s voyeur.

    • Barely Pink March 31, 2011 at 7:45 pm #

      That should be a kink on Fetlife. It’s a sexy one, for sure.

  8. rustynale2 April 6, 2011 at 7:14 pm #

    Oh, Ho! Good deeds do pay off, indeed! Love this; sweet & sexy!

    • Barely Pink April 7, 2011 at 7:51 am #

      Thanks, rusty! I’m a firm believer that spankings should be incentives for good deeds (and deterrents for bad ones). They’re versatile, no?

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