Being good

9 Aug
Please make me a good girl.

I’ve been your dirty girl. I’ve been your naughty girl. I’ve been your slut, your whore, the girl on the horse. I’ve bucked against restraints and kneeled at your feet; I’ve stood before you with my hands on the floor.

Now I want to be your good girl.

Please press your lips to my forehead. Please smooth away my week. Run your fingers down my spine and gently trace the curves of my hips. Circle your arms around me and whisper in my ear, “Thank you for being my very good girl.”

Show me what a good girl gets.

Pull me up and over and in to the folds of your waiting lap. Hold me there with your palm against my back. Rest your other hand on my thighs and knead them like cinnamon bread; savor these moments before the feast.

Rub and rub and rub until our friction warms my cheeks. Then lift your arm, as if in praise, and bring it down again — firm enough for me to know you, soft enough for me to want you — and again, and again…and (oh God, please don’t stop) again.

11 Responses to “Being good”

  1. HEDONE August 9, 2010 at 2:53 pm #

    Mmm.Me thinks something has change ;-)…And what a fantastic tale that I hope, for me, one day will be true.-H

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  2. command August 9, 2010 at 5:01 pm #

    You are my naughty girl, my bad girl, my dirty girl, my 'cow girl', my Brat. Every role you've been for me reflects your submissive heart and desires.And that, my Sweet, makes you my good, my very good, girl.

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  3. Traci August 9, 2010 at 7:36 pm #

    Beautifully written. This recount is a perfect picture of how things should be done. It not only ignites lustiness, but it also reminds me of the warmth I feel with my sweetie when he is touching me, romancing me, and spanking me.

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  4. Traci August 9, 2010 at 7:39 pm #

    Oops and I forgot in that list….Talking to me.

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  5. barely.pink August 9, 2010 at 8:19 pm #

    H: I'd say you're well on your way to finding exactly what you want and need. Go girl. :)D: Awwww, really? I am? Prove it. ;)Traci: Welcome and it's great to see you here! I agree with you completely — there's something magical that happens in the way we communicate. Spanking can be absolutely romantic.

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  6. Em August 11, 2010 at 9:40 pm #

    Loved this 🙂

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  7. barely.pink August 12, 2010 at 8:38 am #

    Thanks, Em! So happy to have you here.

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  8. Celine August 13, 2010 at 9:03 pm #

    Mmmm..yummy. 🙂 Love the cinnamon bread bit..I love it all, really. Celine

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  9. barely.pink August 13, 2010 at 10:11 pm #

    It's tasty being good. :)Thanks, Celine.

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  10. Collar August 15, 2010 at 2:47 pm #

    Well written!I miss my good girl.Collar

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  11. barely.pink August 15, 2010 at 6:05 pm #

    I know you do, Collar. I think it's wonderful that you and she had that special connection. Thanks for coming by; I like seeing you & appreciate your comments!xx

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